Hi friends! 💗 Welcome back to my mini blog. How are you? Hope you’re doing well! This time, I want to share with you short story that I made last week! Enjoy reading guys!
A short flipbook about mental health, loneliness, and the importance of support.
Whisper of the Lost Boy: https://www.flipsnack.com/AC759EB569B/salma-whisperofthelostboy-number06
Title:
Whisper of the Lost Boy
Why this title:
This title reflects Eren’s gentle whispers that only Lily can hear. He is a lost boy who exists between reality and illusion, representing Lily’s loneliness and emotional struggle. His whispers become both comfort and pain in Lily’s life.
Conflict:
The story presents two main conflicts.
• Character vs. Self:
Lily struggles with her own mind, hallucinations, and fear of letting Eren go.
• Character vs. Society:
Lily faces judgment and misunderstanding from people around her, who see her as strange instead of understanding her pain.
FREYTAG’S PYRAMID
1. Exposition
Lily lives in an unhealthy family and feels deeply lonely.
She begins seeing and hearing a ghost named Eren.
Eren becomes the only “friend” who makes her feel alive.
2. Rising Action
Lily talks to Eren more often, even in public.
People start to think Lily is weird.
Her mental condition worsens, Eren’s presence became rare.
Lily’s family notices something is wrong and becomes worried.
3. Climax
Lily is taken to a psychiatrist and diagnosed with Hallucination Disorder.
She is forced to attend therapy and can no longer “talk” with Eren.
Eren slowly fades, leaving only his voices behind.
Lily feels broken.
4. Falling Action
She tries to fight Eren’s whispers, following the doctor’s advice.
Day by day, she opens up to her classmates and the real world.
Lily starts to feel a little stronger than before.
5. Resolution
For the last time, Eren appears one last time and gives his message.
He disappears completely.
Lily decides to keep living, carrying Eren’s memory as her strength.
She promises to stay strong and not let herself break again.
Thank you for taking the time to read this story. Through Whisper of the Lost Boy, I hope to remind you that mental health matters and that no one should face their struggles alone. A little support, understanding, and kindness can make a meaningful difference in someone’s life. Please be gentle with others, and with yourself.
