Hi friends! 💗 Welcome back to my mini blog. How are you? Hope you’re doing well! This time, I want to share with you short story that I made last week! Enjoy reading guys!
A short flipbook about mental health, loneliness, and the importance of support.
Whisper of the Lost Boy: https://www.flipsnack.com/AC759EB569B/salma-whisperofthelostboy-number06
Title:
Whisper of the Lost Boy
Why this title:
This title reflects Eren’s gentle whispers that only Lily can hear. He is a lost boy who exists between reality and illusion, representing Lily’s loneliness and emotional struggle. His whispers become both comfort and pain in Lily’s life.
Conflict:
The story presents two main conflicts.
• Character vs. Self:
Lily struggles with her own mind, hallucinations, and fear of letting Eren go.
• Character vs. Society:
Lily faces judgment and misunderstanding from people around her, who see her as strange instead of understanding her pain.
FREYTAG’S PYRAMID
1. Exposition
Lily lives in an unhealthy family and feels deeply lonely.
She begins seeing and hearing a ghost named Eren.
Eren becomes the only “friend” who makes her feel alive.
2. Rising Action
Lily talks to Eren more often, even in public.
People start to think Lily is weird.
Her mental condition worsens, Eren’s presence became rare.
Lily’s family notices something is wrong and becomes worried.
3. Climax
Lily is taken to a psychiatrist and diagnosed with Hallucination Disorder.
She is forced to attend therapy and can no longer “talk” with Eren.
Eren slowly fades, leaving only his voices behind.
Lily feels broken.
4. Falling Action
She tries to fight Eren’s whispers, following the doctor’s advice.
Day by day, she opens up to her classmates and the real world.
Lily starts to feel a little stronger than before.
5. Resolution
For the last time, Eren appears one last time and gives his message.
He disappears completely.
Lily decides to keep living, carrying Eren’s memory as her strength.
She promises to stay strong and not let herself break again.
Thank you for taking the time to read this story. Through Whisper of the Lost Boy, I hope to remind you that mental health matters and that no one should face their struggles alone. A little support, understanding, and kindness can make a meaningful difference in someone’s life. Please be gentle with others, and with yourself.
I feel sad for Lily😢
BalasHapussend online hug for her
HapusOMG! I FEEL SORRY FOR LILYY🥺
BalasHapusTT
Hapusomg wanna cry for lily🥺
BalasHapuslet's cry together
Hapuswhatt a plot twisttt!! that was amazed me🤩🤩
BalasHapusOMG THANK YOUU
Hapuslilyyy🥺🥺
BalasHapus🥺🥺🥺🥺
Hapusvery goodd🤩
BalasHapusthank ya!
Hapus"hiks, this story touched my heart"
BalasHapuspoor lily🥺🥺🥺🥺
Hapusomg, it was so sad.... i hope lily can meet with eren in another life
BalasHapusi hope so
Hapusthis story makes me cry
BalasHapus🥺🥺🥺🥺
Hapuscan't imagine if i were lily
BalasHapusyah, good thing u're not lily
HapusOMG SO SAD! we need part 2
BalasHapusthere's no part 2, i already tired😅
Hapuspoor lily and eren, they makes me cryyyyy😢😢😢😢
BalasHapusgroup crying session
HapusINTERESTING STORY, LONG DISTANCE HUG FOR LILY
BalasHapusgood story needs good brain hehehe
Hapusomg lilyyyyyy🥺🥺
BalasHapus🥺🥺
Hapushope lily always happy huhuu🥺
BalasHapusshe deserves that🥺
Hapusi love your story, it makes me cry for 3 days hiks😔😔
BalasHapusyeah, it's so sad
HapusKomentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
BalasHapusi hope no one will ever have to face this🥹
BalasHapusi hope so
Hapuswaiting for the next story, wanna cry🥺
BalasHapusthank you bunga for waiting my next story!!!
Hapusom my, it was so tragic!! poor lily🥹🥹
BalasHapus🥹🥹
Hapuswish i could hug lily 🥹🥹🥹
BalasHapussend online hugs for her
Hapusomg i love your story! now i know how to treat someone like lily
BalasHapusplease be gentle with others xixi
Hapussuch a great story!🥺 BUT LILY DOESN'T DESERVE ALL THOSE PAINS!!!!!!!
BalasHapusexactly
HapusWHATTT?! HOW STRONG THE FEMALE CHARACTER IS🥺
BalasHapusyeahhh, strong like the readers
Hapuseveryone was felt sad for lily, but how about eren? we need more from eren pov
BalasHapusohh, WISH LILY ALWAYS FACES GOOD THINGS
BalasHapus😿😿
Hapusi feel sad because of your story, can't imagine how hadr lily survive
BalasHapus😿🫂
Hapusbig hug for lily,🥺
BalasHapus🫂🫂
Hapusso sad :(
BalasHapus:(
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